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Do ya like my book so far?

Question by Hugs, Amy: Do ya like my book so far?
rate this paragraph I Am Disturbed By: me.

Tonight, i couldn’t swallow. My eyes got big. I saw nothing, nothing more then, air. The Sounds are, REAL. I was at least 5 feet away from the door. I looked around. it would take 1.5 seconds, something i could not risk. It came from underneath me, breathing. The noise was disturbing. not like a normal breath, a long pitiful, breath. I suddly got cold. i felt something on my shoulder. I stood as still as rock. As the icey hands felt my back. The breathing again was back. the sound more blood chilling then ever. only this time it was right behind me. i went crazy, my mind finally snapped. After 4 years i finally broke down. i saw eyes glowing red eyes. i couldn’t stop staring, my mind was racing. My life flashed before my eyes. what what was it? “How did she die?” mary asked slightly crying. ” Were not sure yet miss, we are still investigating” The police officer said. ‘You have to find out now, im not staying in this house until you figure it out!” Mary stomped out of the room. “There, on the wall a blood stain.” “It looks as if there was a, well fight. See look the blood smeeres to the other side of the wall. it was like she was dragged along the wall.”
” That’s impossible!” mrs. Mage shrieked. ” i came in the second i woke up at 2 am. the room was just how i, i mean she left it.” ” Hmm. That’s interesting, because someone, or something did it well.” the police officer stammered.
im making another question like this with it revived. ( i made it better)
THANKS
its called do ya like my book so far?

LOL
SAME
HUGS GO CHEAK IT OUT NOW!!

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Answer by Adrian
No, I give it a 5 out of 10. Try to work on your writing, and make it less simple. Also I would recommend fixing the spelling, grammatical, and punctuation/capitalization errors.

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Do you like my book so far? Its a paragraph of a book im writing rate and plz comment!?

Question by Hugs, Amy: Do you like my book so far? Its a paragraph of a book im writing rate and plz comment!?
This is a paragraph of a book im writing.
I am disturbed. By me

Tonight, i couldn’t swallow. My eyes got big. I saw nothing, nothing more then, air. The Sounds are, REAL. I was at least 5 feet away from the door. I looked around. it would take 1.5 seconds, something i could not risk. It came from underneath me, breathing. The noise was disturbing. not like a normal breath, a long pitiful, breath. I suddently got cold. i felt something on my shoulder. I stood as still as rock. As ticycey hands felt my back. The breathing again was back. the sound more blood chilling then ever. only this time it was right behind me. i went crazy, my mind finally snapped. After 4 years i finally broke down. i saw eyes glowing red eyes. i couldn’t stop staring, my mind was racing. My life flashed before my eyes. I almost swore i was about to die, Then it all went black. i heard sounds and cold hands touching my almost lifeless body. my mind is out of control. yet my body was stiff. I couldn’t move i was frozen. My mind was telling my body to scream but i could not. it was impossible, it was like trying to move 10 tons of solid rock by hand, impossible. I felt my heart slow down to my last heart beat, finally my heart stopped. July 7, 2000 i was dead.
“How did she die?” Mary asked slightly crying. ” Were not sure yet miss, we are still investigating” The police officer said. ‘You have to find out now, im not staying in this house until you figure it out!” Mary stomped out of the room. “There, on the wall a blood stain.” “It looks as if there was a, well fight. See look the blood smears to the other side of the wall. it was like she was dragged along the wall.”
” That’s impossible!” Madge Mage shrieked. ” i came in the second i woke up at 2 am. the room was just how i, i mean she left itHm” Hmm. That’s interesting, because someone, or something did it well.” the police officer stammered. ” Amy?” “yes?” i replied ” do you have any ideas on what could have happened to your sister?” My heart sank.
I could answer, but i dide’nt want to. wouldn’t believelive me!
I would sound like a maniac. But i had to. “um, (sigh) every night she would tell me she heard things. it scared me.

THAT’S MY NEW PARAGRAPH RATE IT 1-10
THANKS
HUGS
AMY
look for more of the story.. i added on to it, on another question! ENJOY finding it. Lol go to my account and look at my questions newest one HUGS

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Answer by Audrey M
way cool! 10

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What does a wisdom tooth blood clot look like?

I recently had both my wisdom teeth in my lower jaw pulled the 28th of last month. I’ve been checking them in the in mirror and I’ve noticed that there’s little white stuff growing there and noticed yellowish gunk too. Is that a sign that it’s healing? I have no idea what a wisdom tooth blood clot looks like, that’s the reason I’m asking.

What does a menstrual blood clot look like?

Just wondering what a blood clot looks like. Is it a chunk of dark red, and slimy looking?

Jamaican slang thingy that sounds like “blood clot” or something?

Question by Lena: Jamaican slang thingy that sounds like “blood clot” or something?
what is it and what does it mean?

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Answer by rachel s
blood clot

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Does this sound like pregnancy symptoms?

Swollen gums with metallic taste around the edge where gums and teeth meet, blood when I blow my nose, slight head cold. Also I’ve got this feeling like there’s small pieces of popcorn seed skin in the back of my throat and on the right side of my tongue (and no I haven’t eaten popcorn).

Cat digestive issue – green seaweed stew like “stools” – vet can’t seem to help. Help?!?

Question by george_g_2008: Cat digestive issue – green seaweed stew like “stools” – vet can’t seem to help. Help?!?
Hi. If graphic descriptions of my cat’s body waste is a problem do not read the rest of this.

My cat, age 11, has been having problems with his digestion. I have been to the vet repeatedly, spent more that $ 1,000 so far (can’t keep this up much longer) and still have no answers. We have tried vitamins, diet changes, environment changes, all no help.

SYMPTOMS are as follows:

Stools, vary between:
(a) large soft “foamy” curry colored stools (texture reminds me of that really firm foam they use to fill flat tires with);
(b) soupy curry colored diarrhea (texture like yellow mud with lumps);
(c) slimy dark green diarrhea (texture reminds me of seaweed soup/stew) which dries into a very hard substance,
(d) ordinary looking but very soft stool “turds”.

Cat urinates in the box but defecates outside it (most of the time but not always) so unfortunately we see the details all too clearly as we clean up. We have not seen stool type (a) recently, we have seen a lot of stool type (b) and most recently several stools of type (c). But we have seen all 4 types.

He has lost some weight, he has become occasionally dehydrated due to the diarrhea, he has a healthy (but finicky) appetite as normal and seems to drink normally. Physical activity seems pretty normal.

TESTS:
Full panel blood tests are all normal except a slightly elevated liver indicated. No diabetes, no kidney malfunction. One vet in the office suggested maybe it is possible pancreatic enzyme issues (based on the curry colored stools) but said the test to check that possibility was very expensive.

Stool exam shows no parasites.

ANY IDEAS? I love my cat but I am going broke and no further along than before.
I should mention my cat is a strictly indoor cat (always has been) and there are no green plants for him to eat.

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Answer by Marra
Not sure what kind of diet changes you’ve been trying with your cat, but I’ve read a lot of good reviews about Natural Balance Limited Ingredient Diet (duck/green pea) helping with cats’ digestion. I’m now trying it with my cat too – he seems to have had a lot of the same symptoms as yours. He’s only been on it two days, so not much changes in his digestion yet, but he does seem to be feeling better – more energy, etc.

Good luck!

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MARTHA & THE VANDELLAS ~♫~ (LOVE IS LIKE A) HEATWAVE


MARTHA & THE VANDELLAS – (LOVE IS LIKE A) HEATWAVE. Whenever I’m with him Something inside Starts burning And I’m filled with desire, Could it be the devil in me? Or is this the way love’s supposed to be? (Chorus) It’s like a heat wave It’s burning in my heart I can’t keep from burning It’s tearing me apart Whenever he calls my name So softly and plain Right then, right there, I feel that burning flame Has high blood pressure got a hold of me? Is this the way loves supposed to be? (Chorus) Sax Solo…………….. Sometimes I stare into space Tears all over my face, I can’t explain it, don’t understand it, I ain’t never felt like this before Now this funny feeling has me amazed Don’t know what to do, my head’s in a haze, It’s like a heat wave. Yeah yeah Yeah yeah Ha ohhh yeah Yeah yeah Yeah yeah ohhh yeah I feel it, burning, right here in my heart, Don’t you know its like a heat wave Yeah yeah Yeah yeah ohhh Don’t you know it’s like a heat wave? Burning right here in my heart.

SHOULD WARNINGS on the dangers of BLOOD TRANSFUSIONS like the following be ignored BECAUSE…..?

Question by THA: SHOULD WARNINGS on the dangers of BLOOD TRANSFUSIONS like the following be ignored BECAUSE…..?
….JEHOVAH’S WITNESSES are being proved correct on their stand for the sanctity of blood & for health reasons.?

….The Boston Globe Magazine reports that blood specialist Dr. Charles Huggins admits that blood “must be considered unavoidably non-safe.” He describes blood as “the MOST DANGEROUS SUBSTANCE (my caps) we use in medicine.” Since early 1989 the number of infectious diseases blood banks typically test for has increased to five (HTLV-I, associated with adult T-cell leukemia, syphilis, hepatitis B, AIDS, and hepatitis C). However, according to AMERICAN RED CROSS authority S. Gerald Sandler, “it seems that it’s only a matter of time until we find another rare disease spread by blood transfusion”
UPDATE #1
*** g95 6/8 p. 21 Canada’s “Tainted Blood” Inquiry ***
The Globe and Mail, it is estimated that “as many as 1,000 Canadians a year die of hepatitis C.” The newspaper adds that “up to half of them may have contracted the disease from blood transfusions.”….
…..Justice Krever listened intently to more than a hundred Canadians whose lives have been shattered by HIV and other tragedies resulting from tainted blood. Medical experts have testified that it is impossible to make the blood supply totally safe from disease transmission and other dangers. They have admitted serious risks and misuse associated with blood. Dr. J. Brian McSheffrey, medical director of a regional blood transfusion service, testified that he draws attention to the problem by saying in lectures: “If you have to give a transfusion, you’ve either failed in diagnosis or failed in therapy.”
**PLAYING RUSSIAN ROULETE , with 3 of the 6 chambers in the barrel is getting to be the norm with blood transfusion if not 5 of the 6 , please note:

*** hb p. 19 You Have the Right to Choose ***

Dr. Charles Huggins, who is the director of transfusion service at the large Massachusetts General Hospital, made this very clear: “Blood has never been safer. But it must be considered unavoidably non-safe. It is the MOST DANGEROUS SUBSTANCE ( my caps)we use in medicine.”—The Boston Globe Magazine, February 4, 1990.

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Answer by sedunker
This question is alarmist. Blood transfusions are not a treatment given carelessly or needlessly, like antibiotics. In most cases, the refusal of a blood transfusion means death. Most people, Jehovah’s Witnesses and a few others excluded, will accept the risk of disease over the certainty of death.

Tests of synthetic and thereby guaranteed disease-free blood have run into snags both medical and ethical. Right now, transfusions of real blood are the BEST WE CAN DO (my caps.)

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I see white cell like things in my eyes everytime I look at the sky?

hi every1
whenever I look at the sky or some bright light surface, I see round cell like structures moving around in some fluid! they have a very faint white color and a faint dark outline. these things change In shape, size, and number and location in the eye everyday!! is this normal? if I have done vitamin defieciency, pls tell which one??