Question by Hugs, Amy: Great story rate it PLESE LOOK AT THIS AND READ IT ALLL!!!!?
This is a paragraph of a book im writing.
I am disturbed. By me

Tonight, i couldn’t swallow. My eyes got big. I saw nothing, nothing more then, air. The Sounds are, REAL. I was at least 5 feet away from the door. I looked around. it would take 1.5 seconds, something i could not risk. It came from underneath me, breathing. The noise was disturbing. not like a normal breath, a long pitiful, breath. I suddenly got cold. I felt something on my shoulder. I stood as still as rock. As icey handset felt my back. The breathing again was back. the sound more blood chilling then ever. only this time it was right behind me. i went crazy, my mind finally snapped. After 4 years i finally broke down. i saw eyes glowing red eyes. i couldn’t stop staring, my mind was racing. My life flashed before my eyes. I almost swore i was about to die, Then it all went black. i heard sounds and cold hands touching my almost lifeless body. my mind is out of control. yet my body was stiff. I couldn’t move i was frozen. My mind was telling my body to scream but i could not. it was impossible, it was like trying to move 10 tons of solid rock by hand, impossible. I felt my heart slow down to my last heart beat, finally my heart stopped. July 7, 2000 i was dead.
“How did she die?” Mary asked slightly crying. ” Were not sure yet miss, we are still investigating” The police officer said. ‘You have to find out now, im not staying in this house until you figure it out!” Mary stomped out of the room. “There, on the wall a blood stain.” “It looks as if there was a, well fight. See look the blood smears to the other side of the wall. it was like she was dragged along the wall.”
” That’s impossible!” mrs. Mage shrieked. ” i came in the second i woke up at 2 am. the room was just how i, i mean she left it “Hmm.” That’s interesting, because someone, or something did it well.” the police officer stammered. ” Amy?” “yes?” i replied ” do you have any ideas on what could have happened to your sister?” My heart sank.
I could answer, but i didn’t want to. Wouldn’t believe me!
I would sound like a maniac. But i had to. “um, (sigh) every night she would tell me she heard things. it scared me.” That’s enough!” Mrs. mage yelled. There’s no such thing as evil spirits, that’s all hocus pocus!” My eyes widened. What i saw on the back wall no one would believe. It looked at me its red eyes widened to revel its yellow pupils.
Then before i could do or say anything it disappeared. My mind weakened
What i saw that day, i would never forget. I looked up My heart beating faster than an engine. Nothing, i mean no one was there! where was mrs. mage standing there 3 seconds ago. at that moment I knew what my sister was always talking about. She always used disturbing words, I had nightmares as a child. Now at 13 years old, it was my time to destroy this demonic creature. Just like it had destroyed my sister. “But how?” was the only words on my lips. I steadly walked out of the doorway. Not noticing the red eyes staring from behind. I walked out of home, my childhood memories gone. My sister was dead.
I couldn’t speak. No words left my lips. My cold trembling body was now frozen, for what felt like forever. Finally when my body let me start walking again, I heard my dead sister’s voice. “Miranda?”
I cooed. There was no answer. Right at that moment i checked my watch, and ran to my step mothers house. breathless, I walked into her home and sat down on her nice soft warm couch. “Amy, is that you?’ My sweet step mother asked. “yeah, its me and still alive..”
” oh Amy! don’t be that way. you know the police will figure out what happend.” Being to nice is never a good thing i thought. she needs to stop being so sweet it gets annoying after awhile. ” No they won’t!” i screemed. “They’ll never figure it out, Its a demon!” i finally sqeeked out. “what?” she said sort of anoyed. ” A demon!” i yelled. Why could’nt She figure that out! Why coulde’nt any of them figure that out?
My step mother just stood there for the longest time and then she echoed me, “A demon, Thats it!”
“Thats what?” “thats it!” she said again. “you’ve gone crazy!”
“What, I have not!” “yes ya have, Ever since mirandas death youve been actin very queer. ” if your sister just died, would you be on edge to.” i cried. ” but a demon, amy really?” “you did’nt see it!” i screeched. ” see what?” “Uhhu hu Tha..t!” i gulped. “wha…
Oh my God!” “What is that?”
Hope I left ya hanging
Hugs
AMY

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Answer by topher
pretty dece pretty dece

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